Use specific sensory details, describe accurately the neighborhood where you live.
The sweltering heat weighing me down onto the baked gravel, intensified futher, leaving the stinging sensation on my skin, which brought about frustration , pain, and disspleasure. The old pine trees blew along with the gust of wind- which came to my skin's rescue, and the beautiful flowers bloomed throughout. The scent of the flowers left a therapeutic mark on me, all too sweet to tingle my olfactory sense. Chirpings and singings of the sparrows, guided my gaze to their nest, up the old tree, which brought about shade. Then, someone tapped me from behind.......
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