Online Lesson #4

STEP TWO

1. The ephemeral light dipped in a wonder spectrum on the green clovers snatched the glares of people, and the aroma of the clovers evoked the nostrils, tantalised the tastebuds, recaptured the evening mood of serenity.

2. The vast majority of the clovers whipped out a drooling attraction towards it; trapping a sick obsession for anyone who dared wonder upon it.

3. The priceless picturesque of the beautiful clovers drugged anyone who even stared at it; tingle their olfactory sense and played along with their visual sense by the very sight of it.

4. These clovers were simply beautiful; they assured possession of anyone's attention and ensured the attracted, palpitating heart beats of any kind.

STEP THREE

Passage C : Boneshaker by Cherie Priest.

" around the thigh- deep tidal pools and past the jagged crags of cliff " the words jagged crags portray assonance in the vowel 'a', hence putting emphasis on the 'jagged crags' , describing how extreme the crags on the cliff can be, and hence illustrates the fuller meaning of the runoff, rundown system on the Outskirts.

" Bleached by the ocean and the rain, worn by storms and battered by incoming waves, the tube was decrepit." There again another assonance in " worn by storms" , putting emphasis on the 'o' sound, listing importance to note the degree of rundown, and it shows the storms even supported it.

Passage D : Distances by Vandana Singh"

" now she was back to crawling across a two-d floor like a little desert roll-bug" It is a simile drawing relation between her as the desert roll-bug. It is a simile as there is the word 'like'.

 " she had to touch the stone cold walls", assonance on the vowel 'o', strongly emphasizing that the whole environment was terrifying, and eerie.

STEP FOUR

The ephemeral light dipped in a wonder spectrum on the green clovers snatched the glares of people, and the aroma of the clovers evoked the nostrils, tantalised the tastebuds, recaptured the evening mood of serenity. ->

The ephemeral light dipped in a wonder spectrum on the green clovers, and snatched the glares the people who were like babies staring at a brand new strange unique rainbow- the aroma of the clovers evoked the nostrils, tantalised the tastebuds, recaptured the evening mood of serenity.

The vast majority of the clovers whipped out a drooling attraction towards it; trapping a sick obsession for anyone who dared wonder upon it. ->

The vast majority of the clovers whipped out a drooling attraction towards it; trapping a sick obsession for anyone who dared wonder upon it- they seemed as awestruck as a kid in luxury cars.

STEP FIVE

In Passage C, Boneshaker, the mood of an eerie, rundown environment was brought out, through the vivid descriptions on the setting, and the descriptive and detailed words bring out a sense of reality in the story ourselves, hence putting us in the mood. The whole setting creates a sad, demolished mood, whereby evoked through vivid description and feelings on how Briar felt, and her thoughts. Such descriptions alone completely illustrate the excellence in which how the author brings out the solemn monotonous mood.

In Passage D, Distances, the author portrays the exact process in which Anasuya makes her ways to the atrium, and throughout this long paragraph shows many many descriptions and thoughts and feelings upon how she thinks the hallways are. As similes are injected in the extract, the mood of anxiety, and mystery would be carried along with it. 

STEP SIX

The ephemeral light dipped in a wonder spectrum on the green clovers, and snatched the glares the people who were like babies staring at an unique rainbow- the aroma of the clovers evoked the nostrils, tantalised the tastebuds, recaptured the evening mood of serenity. The tranquil evening sun dawned upon the vast majority land, weighing down the burdened, yet gentle warmth that caused sooth. The lightness of the earth paced up the evening's peace- symbolically, and significantly comparable to gold. 

STEP SEVEN. FINAL STEP (:

Bleached in an awesome spectrum of golden magnificent sunshine, which baked the vast land beneath it; the soothing warmth contributed to the gentleness, the peace, which these green clovers emitted in a wonderful, yet creative array.The radiant and composed glare of the tranquil evening from the amber, mahogany sun, softly caressed the clovers with much respect and love like an adult to his child.

The lime , emerald colouring of the clovers, all so arranged in the vast majority, standing out amongst all others, outshone the rest of the yellow sunflowers, the daffodils, the roses, in beauty. The clovers simply reflected the imagery of beauty, vividly bringing out the light, expressions of relaxation and evening's rest. The residents retreated to their refuge, all envisioning a luxury awaiting them at home, but reveries were interrupted by the 'even more attractive' clovers, which left their nostrils evoked by the aroma, tastebuds tantalised, and was recaptured by the evening mood of serenity.

A zephyr caressed nature's beauty with such affection; even it was attracted to it. The daffodils, roses, and sunflowers stood in utmost jealousy of the clovers, and pulled a long face; they seemed to wither. The picturesque, seemingly perfect view of mother nature, was incomplete without the contribution of the lightness of the earth, which paced up the evening's pace, and dawned the excellence of the beauty symbolically, and yet significantly comparable to gold.